Elevator Pitch 2 - Assignment 17

Link to video:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1_EA2SC7NAc

Transcript: What if I told you never have to have that after lunch late afternoon lull. What if I told you you don’t need to crave a nap everyday. What if I told you you can be more productive while having more free-time at the same time. And what if I told you you can accomplish all that without having to take a magic energy pill or consume a drink with additive and fillers and other ingredients you cannot pronounce. What if you were able to reach your fitness goals by reading and practicing what is sent to your email inbox. What if you can learn healthy habits by just scrolling through Instagram. Your Body Loves You is a service that enables college student to take control of their lives, energy, and bodies. Rather than having to fight against your body, make it work alongside you by incorporating our hundreds of tips contributed by dozens of students like yourself. Out staff of UF students have spent years crafting their daily lives to optimize their lifestyles. Whether this be from changing their diet, workout routines, or other aspects of mindfulness, our staff has found the secrets of feeling good all the time that are not actually secrets, it is what your body is designed to do. We are not salespeople and we are not crazy, we simply believe your body is your best friend, you have just not been a good friend to your body. We want you to learn what your body has to offer you, but more importantly, wants to offer you. Follow YBLY Daily on Instagram or sign up for our free daily emails to truly understand for your body to love you back.

Reflection: The feedback I received partially surprised me because I did not think all my comments would include them mentioning they would use the product. Of course I know this is a service that can definitely help UF students, but I did not expect it to be received so well.

Changes: I did not change much in my video. After personally critiquing my previous video, I decided to speak slower, use more  hand movements, and really emphasize the "You" language throughout my pitch.