Video Link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VYOvDR1J2zU
Transcript: What if I
told you never have to have that after lunch late afternoon lull. What if I
told you you don’t need to crave a nap everyday. What if I told you you can be
more productive while having more free-time at the same time. And what if I told
you you can accomplish all that without having to take a magic energy pill or
consume a drink with additive and fillers and other ingredients you cannot
pronounce. What if you were able to reach your fitness goals by reading and
practicing what is sent to your email inbox. What if you can learn healthy
habits by just scrolling through Instagram. Your Body Loves You is a service
that enables college student to take control of their lives, energy, and
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Reflection:
I think the feedback I received was in line with what I expected. Some people
said my hand gestures were a good touch and I spoke at a good pace. There were
little negative comments which was reassuring.
Changes: One
thing I knew I could improve on is the excitement in my tone and my enthusiasm.
I naturally have a very monotone voice and do not have exaggerated facial
expressions. So while other may be able to naturally sound enthusiastic, that
is something I actually need to be aware of and try to do more.
Hey Matt! I think your business idea captures a market that is receiving tremendous growth right now. The fitness industry, especially fitness Instagram accounts, are becoming very popular and I believe if you were to tailor this business idea specifically to UF students and then expand to other colleges, you would be really successful. I loved your elevator pitch! Your energy was great and very informative.
ReplyDeleteMatt, this was a great pitch you delivered. The fitness industry as a whole is growing exponentially and I think that your target market is the perfect one to try and obtain. Fitness is one of the growing social media trends in the world and outside of social media it is still a huge objective for many people! I think from your other pitches you did a great job being more dynamic and passionate about your whole topic as a whole. Great job!
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